The Kayaking Trip
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In the morning at 7.00 am.our family.went to the beach. they were so excited.we are going to the beach .We went for a trip . . It was a long trip .We were so excited. When we got there we will so excited. We got out of the car and got our kayak. We were so excited when we got in the beach without kayak. We felt a strange thing. It felt like a shark it was a tiger shark . we will so we were so scared. We got our sticks and we heat them . we were Russian to shore. We but our kayak in the car . and want home . the end.